Thoughtful, player-focused feedback for indie and solo devs.

Offerings

Starter Playthrough

  • For demos and short games up to 3 hours (on average)

  • Full playthrough with notes

  • Primary focus on dialogue, UI clarity, and tone (as well as for grammar, typos, and punctuation edits)

  • Reduced rate or no cost, in exchange for a recommendation or reference

Core Review

  • Full gameplay review (or agreed scope)

  • Detailed notes document, including:

    • Grammar and punctuation fixes

    • Natural phrasing rewrite suggestions

    • Unclear or confusing text

    • UI/UX language issues

  • Light bug reporting

  • Reduced rate or no cost, depending on game length, complexity, and turnaround requirements

Deliverables

  • Annotated documentation of suggested edits, in whatever format you prefer

  • An organized issue list, by type and priority (to you)

  • Notes tied to gameplay moments, including screenshots (where applicable)— not just isolated text

  • Screen recording of gameplay (shared upload or unlisted link on YouTube), if it helps expedite your workflow

  • Follow-up Q&A consulting by email, to ensure you understand the edits and recommendations

Interested in working together?

When you reach out, please share:

  • The type of game you’d like reviewed or link to your game page

  • Estimated gameplay duration you’d like me to cover

  • Game platform(s)

  • Your goals for the review and any timeline requirements

Contact

[email protected]‍

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